All Comments on 'An Unusual Meeting'

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Not only completely pointless, but very awkwardly written - and "Incest"? I don't think so.

You are busy playing with the most important of the sex organs, the human mind. You have set up a very hot scene and given the readers imiginition wide range to fill in the blanks...

Get real Jena

I agree with Scotty and not those other derogatory comments.

It's a good story that stimulates the mind and invites ideas for a sequel.

The appeal of incest to some of us is the knowledge of the relationship and its forbidden nature. While the story is okay, it does not represent itself as an incest piece.

if this wasn't marked incest..i wouldn't have known it was..there should have been SOMETHING that hints of something more

Not worried about what others said....I liked it! It left something to the imagination of the reader to determine who these 2 actually were. I imagined them as brother and sister, which made it just a little more taboo.

Apparently there are many out there that do not understand the concept of "prologue". See also "anticipation". If I were to venture a guess, I would say she is setting us up for a really wild mind-fuck as the relationship (whatever it is) develops. Patience, little grasshopper!

use your imagination people, though I know that's difficult for a lot of you. Sheesh.

I can see so many scenarios that my mind has created. one vivid mind lark would be of a mother and son, which for me is the ultimate sexual play.I think that it is so forbidden, that it makes it the over the top orgasmic adventure.Thanks for giving me a ride on your sexual magic carpet. ....Rich

Liked it. I was reading and waiting for the identification to occur and it did not. Leaving it open like that is different and allows so many possibilities. Why complain so harshly? Well done! Please continue.

another waste of time from jena121

this should be in Erotic coupling not Incest as there was nothing in this story of anything of incestuous nature unless the next chapter involves him finding out that she is his cousin or long lost sister.

as usual jena wasted her time and mine. if the story DOES NOT give a relationship between the characters so we know they are related then it needs to be in a different catagory like erotic couples. sounds like jena is getting senile and has lost her grasp on reality. delete this trash and post it in the erotic couples area where it belongs.

Earlier comments. I felt a lot of anticipation of discovering who they were. I like the concept. Just wish there had been a few more clues!

Story was so-so, but the ending...... brother / sister; mom / son ; aunt / nephew........ That took the story to a new level. Congratulations