by TrampsAnThieves
Abso-fuckin-lutely amazing. So hot and sexy. Loving it and would like this to continue until it's complete.
This is an OUTSTANDING story! Definitely going in my favorites. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thanks for sharing.
Very well written and it is well thought out. It seems that you're very well versed with the formalities and expectations of the culture.
What a wonderful story. I'm so glad for all of the open communication - no one is being dishonest or cheating. The characters straddle the line between traditionalist and more relaxed mores. The characters are great and realistic. A++
Once again you have crafted another series that has followers checking your submission for new stories that cause them to stop read other authors submissions so they can read your latest before the new gets worn off.
I feel like the kids who were constantly asking the bookstores for the next Harry Potter book. This is a great story and I eagerly await the rest of the chapters.
There are at least two more chapters missing that cannot wait to read. Lets go, i am not getting any younger here. Very sweet story,but not close to being finished.
I enjoyed this story because it was light reading with a little bit of comedy and love. I didn’t mind reading Spanish before the translation. Well written as well
Please go back to using the Spanish as you did in part 1, it allows the reader to feel closer to the charactors!
I also miss seeing Spanish prior to the translation to English. To me it was a refresher for the language I learned decades ago, as well as helping emphasize the cultural differences that exist. This is a great story. I anticipate you will have at least two more chapters forthcoming and, hopefully, many more.
Definitely more love your writings and charter building, but on serval of your stories, you leave us wanting more
I'm not a Spanish speaker, but I'd much prefer the Spanish without translations, or at least with the translations somewhere besides the middle of the sentences. Obviously there are differing opinions on this.
I love it and please don't worried about putting Spanish in there if people want to read it in Spanish their computer will change it for them. great job. I had a offer to do this with my aunt years ago but I told them I had a vasectomy. about 5 yrs. before they ask me and yes I know I could have got some nice pussy and just said something must be wrong with me also but didn't.