by Chris6160
Nice start, I'm curious to see where this will be going. I'm guessing the "Meteor" will bring the fantasy element into the story?
The threads are building and this looks to be a fun ride with you again. Loving it so far. Thank you.
I know teenagers use slangs a lot, but them saying "sus" and "not gonna lie" a lot feels off. Maybe tone it down a bit. Anyway, just my opininion. 5 stars.
"Sus" and "not gonna lie" every other paragraph ruins the flow of what could be a great story.
European C, or American C? Yes, there is a difference.
With a teacher like that, he had best start getting A+.
Interesting characters. Promising plot. Love the writing skills. Five stars.
PP