All Comments on 'Average High School Life Ch. 01'

by Chris6160

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Kae_BrightKae_Bright10 months ago

Nice start, I'm curious to see where this will be going. I'm guessing the "Meteor" will bring the fantasy element into the story?

dwoelfledwoelfle10 months ago

The threads are building and this looks to be a fun ride with you again. Loving it so far. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This happened to me once. Amazing coincidence!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I know teenagers use slangs a lot, but them saying "sus" and "not gonna lie" a lot feels off. Maybe tone it down a bit. Anyway, just my opininion. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

"Sus" and "not gonna lie" every other paragraph ruins the flow of what could be a great story.

CheeachaserCheeachaser5 months ago

European C, or American C? Yes, there is a difference.

With a teacher like that, he had best start getting A+.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Hella too much "sus" and "not gonna lie."

PerverPeperPerverPeper19 days ago

Interesting characters. Promising plot. Love the writing skills. Five stars.

PP

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