by Many Feathers
The beginning was not your usual style so you had me going..but I loved the twist at the end..This is a hell of a story..written by the best of the best
Great story with two interesting twists-anybody that writes some anonymous feedback about this being so sick or whatever obviously didn't read this one-this is really is a great story with two surprises-one not so big and the other one...well, read it and find out!
BLOWING Me away with this sudden surprise ending! Dear Lord! My butt is literally numb from sitting on the edge of My computer chair {and I won't tell you what condition the rest of My bottom is in right now} <wink> but you can use your imagination and figure that one out. And speaking of imagination, I cannot wait to see what your sensuous imagination has in store for us in stories for the rest of the alphabet! I am so very happy you have returned to entertain and spur My fantasies for Me, My kindred spirit.
<kiss>
Your Sultry Tart
I was nervous at first...bringing back memories (not so good ones) but I'm glad i finished the whole story. Great work as usual.
Smooches
I always finish the story when I start it and I sure am glad of that. I wasn't sure this was gonna be my kind of story but it sure turned out to be. great job.
wtf ? the whole wife and husband deal is such a fucking turn off, the whole story was pathetic, especially the beggining. i definetly see how some people might love the story, but for me its a piece of shit and needs more work
Why do you insist on turning a nonconscent into a consensual story?
AGAIN, FUCK WIT ANONS, WITH NOTHING GOOD TO SAY. I WAS PRETTY SURE I HAD IT FIGURED OUT AT THE BEGINNING, HER WORKING IN A LEATHER CLOTHING STORY! I HAD SOME LADY FRIENDS OF MY OWN WITH THE SAME FANTASIES. FREQUENTED A BUDDY'S LEATHER ESTABLISHMENT CALLED "BOX OF RAIN". DAMN THEY WERE HOT, ACTIVE AND VERY KINKY
And that my friend is how we keep the love light burning. Fantasy and roleplay are definitely great additions to your sexual repertoire. Great story! Well thought out and written as always. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.