All Comments on 'Bad Neighbours Pt. 04'

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Qwer12Qwer12about 1 month ago

Well done again and with lots of fun drama and cheating and falling down the rabbit hole. This couple is in for the ride of their life. Fun times around in this five star adventure. Cheers and rock them on.

DavidSilver_GERDavidSilver_GERabout 1 month ago

Great continuation. Sounds at the end like both know that something is going on, and the other knows, but if they spell it out it will be too real.

powah9372powah9372about 1 month ago

What a great continuation! waiting for the next part is going to feel like an eternity.

Not sure which character is getting the most sexual gratification.

The line between desire and blackmail is so thin! Surprised Andy's head hasn't exploded from all the experiences occurring at once.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Just plain evil. There's the typical wrongs that people do to people, but Dean and Jenna are evil incarnate. They need to be eliminated. Andy needs to man up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This is a really fun story! I'd love to see how/if Abbie is being manipulated too. I'm sure she's being played just as much as Andy. 5*

threeman45threeman45about 1 month ago
Great series

Just came across this. Great series. Well thought out and well written.

Thanks for your work.

EmmeluringenEmmeluringenabout 1 month ago

I love this! It would be interesting to hear Abbies side of the story, too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Bit rapey innit?

GcoachGGcoachGabout 1 month ago

Fucking fantastic!!! More please. I love the couple tag team manipulation of the other couple. So fucking hot!!

AfishingonadoAfishingonadoabout 1 month ago

The mindfucking of Andy keeps getting hotter and hotter. Dean and Jenna are quite the likable manipulators I must say.. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

wow they really are up to their eyes in it can't wait for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Im in love!!

theavgjimjones1theavgjimjones1about 1 month ago

Keep it cumming! LOVE IT!

BuferBuferabout 1 month ago

Super hot, keep going!

spinpole2001spinpole2001about 1 month ago

Great story that I read in one sitting

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

The pegging at the beginning was great, hope we see Jenna dominate him more. Well written story, looking forward for the next chapter

shvg65shvg6530 days ago

I really like a (boiling the frog) story. Andy makes a great frog.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Great story! I sure hope the next chapter is out soon. I wish I could give you more than a 5 Erin. I was actually so into the story that I was thinking Abbie was my wife at times. I really think Andy is going to have a hard time satisfying Abbie from now on unless she is thinking it is Dean fucking her.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Laughable effort about a bunch of infantile existences in an idiotic tale. Happens when in the young years they swing to close to a wall. Later they get the impression to be able to write something meaningful.

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AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Good story shame Andy is going to become fuck you for Jenna.

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