All Comments on 'Becky's Tease Ch. 01'

Fun adaptation. I'm curious to see where you go with this. I like the dominant Becky.

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This story represents my twelfe piece of work on Literotica. I am calling these works my Dirty Dozen. I am currently working on my next piece (most likely a sequel to this story.) it will be part of my Dirty Bakers Dozen.

OK premise.

But teasing is too matter of fact.

And so is his acquiescense to eating her pussy. Better he'd objected. Better if he claimed never having eaten a pussy before.

Better if she'd given him instructions/directions/lesson about how she wanted him to lick and suck her.

Three stars.

"OK premise, but teasing is too matter of fact."

It is really fun to see (read) the difference between male and female authors. This take on the original story is a great gender comparison. Study the differences.

I am a fan of science fiction ... by male authors. The emotional baggage women bring to those stories sort of turns me off. I like to think I know the gender of an author simply from context. In erotica I analyze gender also, whether stated or not. The importance of "realism" can be boring to male readers.

There is nothing wrong with female eroticism, in fact quite appealing. It's just the bits guys want to read are less important than the pieces women like.

I think the characters are all so believable and Becky's slow but very deliberate embrace of power is intoxicating. The subject of her teasing is exactly the guy you would like to see this happen to. A pure erotic joy to read.

The early stage of a new sexual exploration is what gives this an erotic tension, but also sweetness. Tantalizing start... moving on, TW01 😀

Nicely written. Maybe Barry will spend more time appreciating his partners and Becky in particular. Relationships are between all partners.

Looking forward to where new realisation goes.