All Comments on 'Being Human Ch. 01-06'

I love the dialog it really flows

thanks from germany

Very enjoyable and realistic, please continue

A terrific start.

Very clever yet very entertaining.

Fun and interesting beginning

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Awesome story, can't wait to hear what PRIS says next.

Great start to a story. Lots of potential here for drama and intrigue. I look forward to reading more of your work.

this is fun!

Great story and as usual great dialogue

Awesome story... the similarity between Pixel and Pris is well drawn. A great exploration of some of the possible unforeseen consequences of AI.

What a wonderful story start. Your creativity and writing skil shows in this first piece. I hope you continue to develop it through to its conclusion.

Thanks for sharing your efforts with all of us.

Why do so many authors here write so many starts to so many great stories n then leave them unfinished ? Great story really liked it but because u didnt finish it 1 star other wise it would have been a 5 star story i think.

Please finish up the story

It's very nice

Really hope the author comes back to this story; so much potential...

I enjoyed this! There are a lot of interesting ideas in the mix. I was kinda hoping the AI would figure out how to timeshare into Sarah's body and be the amazon top Pixel needs her to be... and of course, the villain needs to make his comeback and be defeated by the trio, too. Bring on Book Two!