All Comments on 'Birthday Present (Ch. 02)'

HOT!!!! 5!

R & D conducting rogue experiments, wonder what they gave him and how. Some hot fucking going on.

We're having fun now! I love the originality and the awesome writing. I can't wait to see where you take us next.

A little over the top but a fun read!

The hint of 3 months of Lydia got the ring & box at the estate sale in and the sex started getting more adventurous again as she started cleaning it up should start coming into their thoughts soon.

The total orgistic sex around them; starting at the restaurant should be related to the gifting of the ring to the new high priest & all women willing to serve Aphroditie. The mythology book on the coffee table will probably open open up as well to guide them to the rituals.

Loved it!

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

SO freaking hot! This chapter is even better than the first chapter, can't wait for next!

Solar storm, aliens, Community water supply, toxin released in the air, whatever it is, it's frantic and fun so far. I'm waiting to see how he learns to control it, and the real origins of the ring that is behind this.

Fun! By the way Jackie becomes Julia and back to Jackie again.

Fun, sexy story!

"... completely naked while her husband had desert, ..."

Erm, dessert??

Wild !

I think he needs to take the subway home. 😁

Nice twist 👌 👍 we can guess the cause but interested I how you proceed with so many soo horny.

What will they all think when the truth comes out.?? Great writing !!

Brilliant! More please?

I’m loving this story and hope that you continue with it. Jack and Lydia both have some explaining as to what is going on and causing all this sexual energy to flow. I’m convinced that it has to do with the ring and Lydia’s cleaning it up. There are a lot of people that need answers to this including me! Thank You!!!

P.S. This story could be cross posted to “Super Natural” IMHO