by TwistedManc
This was a lot of fun, but there's one continuity error. When he pulls up he asks the girl her name, and she replies with "John?" then a bit later you have her ask his name.
Just loved it! you've got the inspiration from porn movie called "fake taxi" on XVIDEOS; nicely written tho.
"You know you're the first passenger to ask me that in a long time," I told her, "My names John." A long time? Funny. I thought it was only a few minutes, given that she asked him if he was John before she got into the cab and he said "yeah, get in." Continuity.
So Charlotte sartre pretends to have image issues and a cabby fucks her in exactly the way Charlotte sartre usually gets fucked? Very original.
Great! Not the most original story, but it does not have to be that way. It's well writen. There is a small continuity error about his name, but not a big deal. Hopefully this goth girl rides again that cab.