by rckplsky
... Six o'clock is 0600 (am) or 1800 (pm) in military time, not 1600. Lol
"It was six or 1600 in military time when Seaman Recruit Alexis Lundz returned from PT."
Military time adds 12 hours to whatever time in the pm it is, therefore 6 pm would be 1800.
"They didn't exchange many words after that. Stacy led Alex to the shower and they finally had that shower that they wanted. " Who is Stacy?
story was well excecuted but the slip of "stacy" for Cindy disrupts the entire flow of the ending...
Not sure incan read this with all the errors. First and foremost. Don't start with military and then fuck it up. Seriously that ruined your entire opening. That's ad far as I read and had to come here and comment.