by DoctorWolf
I like the way u have brought the conflict in nice job. Mechmanas
I like the conflict as well, hope that Lucas doesn't get into too much trouble. Also curious to find out the explanation behind Linda's death. Looking forward to more.
This has been a very good read. Have to say the introduction scene between Joel and Elizabeth in the restaurant was filled with sexual tension, nice job!
Non human stories are not typically something that hold my interest, but this story definitely will have me checking back for the next chapter!
tale. I can't wait to see what else you'll come up with. Thanks so much for writing.
I am loving your story. Joel and his wolves have been heavy handed but endearing at the same time. I like that she is strong and will be able to stand up to him. Interesting twist having her taken. The poor 'kook'. Hope you tell us what happened to his Linda. You left us hanging...not knowing who is at the door. I just doubt Joel would have let her not have any guards so why would they have been able to kidnap her? Maybe the explosion stopped his men. Keep writing. Can't wait for more!
Thanks for the quick posting of this wonderful chapter, I really hate cliffhangers and could have used several more pages! Love this story and need Joel to come to the rescue and take care of the bitch that wanted her out of the way!! Maybe Lucas will realize what his four supposed friend did and take some revenge. Please post more soon I can't wait to read more of you awesome story!
I have read all the chapters and can't wait to read more. Love nonhuman stories and you are definitely one of the better authors.
why oh why couldn't i have found your story once you had finished it. I hate waiting.
Love the story!! Really great. totally addicted to it now lol. hope u submit more soon, cant wait for the next chapter.
This chapter brought some depth to the story. I think I can smell the conspiracy. I think Joel will not be pleased, especially since he seems to have traitors around him. I hope Kook will realize that Elizabeth is not Linda, and even more than that Joel didn't have anything to do with killing the real Linda. Joel may be a bit creepy with the stalker bit, but I don't think him a murderer. If Kook isn't insane beyond reason, he may even be able to help out the culprit behind this whole mess. Great job. Very interesting writing.
Not a pleasant chapter, but still there is something about it ...
This story is absolutely riveting. It just keeps me wanting to read more.
Poor Elizabeth!
I hope her friend is okay,and didn't get blown to pieces. I hope she gets her own back. I'm so intrigued by this story!
Sarai
It's a good story so far, just a couple of things stood out though. Earlier your character had commented that she knew how to cook but then in this chapter she said she didn't. The other thing that broke the flow of the story was that it was a little too conveinient that she suddenly recalled the wolves in the van and their crucial conversation...
Just wondering if someone editted this for you before you posted. Not being picky just the grammar at some points is off, it causes my mind to faulter in the reading. Otherwise very well done.
the only reason to keep reading cause you just stop mid story. made this far not continuing. Get to a transition point for future stories. The way this is written (abrupt stops and starts) leads to frustration. I want to know how the story ends, but I can't stomach the way you stop almost mid paragraph.
Seriously? DoctorWolf is one of the best writers I've seen. Her stories build layers of excitement, intrigue, drama, sex and love. Keep reading. You won't be disappointed unless you have very bad taste in literature.
The abrupt turn of events was not really smooth or fluid, it just came out of nowhere and the way you describe her kidnapping and transfer from one place to another was utterly confusing.
It might be a complement that something came out of nowhere but yours was terrible.
Sorry, I know it's expecting a lot from the stories on this site to not have plot holes but how on earth does it make sense to have her stalked 24/7 after first meeting her yet right up until the moment that she's kidnapped no one is around to help?? Meh.