All Comments on 'Brooke's Game 03'

I was so excited to see this chapter arrive, and I wasn’t disappointed. I hope I’m reading accurately between the lines of where this might lead - where the story arc develops; and its could easily be one the best stories out there. Can’t wait to see what happens to these three characters next.

Excellent chapter!

I am really enjoying this on going.

I love the details of the fucking. I can picture in my mind Brooke's big beautiful tits, her sexy ass, her great thighs and legs, and her beautiful kissable lips.

I can't wait to read the next chapter(s). Please continue.

Excellent! more stories like this

Another very well written chapter to this story which also made alot of sense. Broke his feelings of guilt and being trapped, didn't get silly. The build up of the inevitable that they were going to ravage each other was well thought out

I have you as a favorite You say that you are welcome to ideas I have some for this story if interested. Great story

This is so good. Please keep writing.

Incomplete

This series should be called “Boys Are so Stupid”! George is the perfect example of how boys can be so easily controlled. They get in over their head and then get angry and violent but then when the problem is resolved they miss what they had and totally screw themselves again. And now, at the end of this chapter he has been marked by Brooke and is about to get into deep shit with Charlotte. TOO BAD GEORGE! YOU AND YOUR OUT OF CONTROL COCK DESERVE WHATS CONING TO YOU!