All Comments on 'Casey's Fall Ch. 05'

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Anonymousabout 4 years ago

What a great series...

I wish you spent more time on the sex scene, that was over way too fast :(

Hopefully next time she has sex you take your time describing it with tons of details and sexy language.

Also the registered nudist thing is awesome, and I hope it becomes a huge part of the story in chapters 17+ with tons of details and more inner monologue about reluctance and humiliation...

majapro almost 4 years ago

love

finally love in the air, thankx :)

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I generally write stories with a reluctant ENF (embarrassed nude female) with public nudity & sex theme, but other things will creep in there from time to time, even a little femdom. One of the key elements of my plots is to imagine what a world would be like if certain bizarr...

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