All Comments on 'Casey's Rise Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice Twist

I was hoping Jolene would exercise her control a few more chapters . I was enjoying the spanking aspect and possible widening of viewership. Having Jolene as a possible nude indent could give Cassandra a chance to achieve that objective at the expense of soon to be her new slave and former wife. it could also increase M/F interaction for both Cassandra since she is no longer a virgin at the expense of Jolene. Than you for the story and good luck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Revenge is gonna be sweet

Awesome stuff so far!

I hope you lean into the humiliation of Jolene. Make her get off on it, and make that feed the humiliation even more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

love the new developments. I like to see justice served in the end.

I can still see another couple chapters here before you bring it all to a close.

majapromajaproalmost 4 years ago

nice turning page :)

Shelscott45Shelscott45almost 3 years ago

I Love it!! Payback Is A serious BITCH!!!

PEOPLE REALLY Need to Pay Close Attention to what They Do to Others;

as Actions have Almost ALWAYS Proven to Come Back and Bite You in the ASS!!

There IS A REASON Why We Believe in FATE!!

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I generally write stories with a reluctant ENF (embarrassed nude female) with public nudity & sex theme, but other things will creep in there from time to time, even a little femdom. One of the key elements of my plots is to imagine what a world would be like if certain bizarr...

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