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All Comments on 'Choto Temple Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Promising Intro

Nice introduction, drawing the reader into the story. Just wish the chapter had been longer. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well written so far. Will reserve judgement and rating till I see what the whole looks like.

So far interesting and intriguing.

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

A bit of mystery, plus a good visual of Japanese women, nice bit of scene setting.

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I'm a Portland, Oregon-based, frequently touring songwriter/musician. I also write essays, do podcasting, and occasionally write erotica. You can find me on FetLife as Choto.

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