All Comments on 'Cindy's Awakening'

Troy is described as an older, handsome, muscular guy. Maybe naked he has a nicely haired chest, sexy treasure trail and cock bush. Ready for round two?

This is such a fun story. Well told, exciting, and delightfully naughty. NorCalFun

You write well. A few peccadilloes, which could be easily caught and fixed by have been fixed before you posted. I still make errors like these, and I wrote professionally for almost 30 years (dull, scientific and medical articles). Working in that for so long killed my imagination, so thanks for sharing yours with me. I found it very erotic with just enough detail. It was very stimulating (and I am over 70). Keep writing and the more you write the better you will become. Let it sit for a week or a few days, then read it again before you post. I found errors in my master's thesis written 50 years ago that were overlooked by the defense committee. I published this, and the journal editor missed them too. Very embarrassing! I added you to a favorite author list. Hope to see more from you!