All Comments on 'Climbing the Shamelessness Ladder Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved the detail you present in your stories. Feel I am there. And running through the story twice to me works quite well. It is interesting and touching twice over. Some new details too.

bozorinobozorinoover 2 years ago

This is a wonderful story, truly original, and I enjoyed it very much. It's kind of a documentary if you know what I mean.

Only one thing puzzled me. I would imagine, that our protagonist would have some feeling about Robert that she does not talk about. For example, is he the kind of guy that she would want as boyfriend? Or is he simply, as she says her best male friend? Is it possible not to have ever thought of a friend of the opposite gender without considering whether they are considered dating material? Would you be interested if they had a twin, so as not to mess with a friend's guy? In other words was he totally non-appealing, or was any feeling of that sort censored in her telling, or even repressed because of her friendship(s) ?

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Vitavie is of mixed European extraction. She studied maths and art history in Germany. After a less than glorious employment history, through lack of motivation, but a lively social life, she married a business man and converted to being a socialite. She writes essentially in...