by Vitavie
Excellent continuation of the first part. Very sensible commentary from the family. From a male point of view, excellent comment from her Mom regarding her period, and the educational value for the males. Again, it feels like a true story, a documentary. Great Job.
Also, from her POV we now hear that she is somewhat aroused when her brother Ben is ogling her. This kind of confession was missing in the first part, although it was, now that I think of it, hinted at because her friend Louise commented that she was wet...
Forgot to add that I very much look forward to the next installment on this story. I'm curious where it will go and I'm not sure I can guess.
Bozorino, I have submitted Part 3 and you will see it very soon, the processing by Literotica willing. It concerns Joanna as the centre of a party.
The greatest compliment, "it feels like a true story, a documentary".
Did you like the narrative running by twice, once in the third person, once in the first?