by RainierWriterII
Once again you have proven why you are on my Favorite authors' list. Great job
You've done an amazing job with this story and captured everything just as I knew you would. Great job...
RW2,
You've done it again. Great story line. well written and hot, not to mention a good spanking to boot. Thanks for your efforts and please keep the stories coming.
What an excellent tale! It was well written and as erotic as they come. Thanks for a really outstanding Five Star Story!
Any good little girl knows how to take care of her daddy. Very, very hot! Thanks for sharing.
I identify strongly with Dani. My dad and I are pretty close, and I just discovered that he's into porn too (I am too). We're still kinda awkward, but we're getting more and more comfortable with it. He offered to buy me a vibe (slightly underage, store wouldn't let me in). Do you think this is going somewhere? Anyway, 5 star story! The build-up was written masterfully.
Excellent story! Well written without being vulgar.
Thanks for sharing!
WOW, THAT WAS A HOT STORY. I COULD FEEL THE HEAT RIGHT AWAY. EXCELLENT WRITING.
I loved the story............so erotic and believable. Great detail.
I would like to take care of my hot daddy :) I enjoyed it and hope to read more from you
You are quickly becoming my favorite author...
Your ability to weave such a beautiful tale regarding a topic so forbidden just proves you have mad skills, as an erotic writer. You have a wonderful talent for character development, which is often difficult to achieve with short stories. You are truly on your way to becoming a master at combing the essential elements necessary for every great short story. I definitely want more!
Showing your sweet romantic side. Don't loose your edge it is incest remember.
Only with my step daughter, she is so beautiful, her figure is one that shows just a little excess like baby fat. When she dresses up on nights she goes out she is a dream. She is married and has one child, and occasionally brings laundry here to wash, I love these visits because when she doesn't finish and leaves, I sort through her stuff for her panties, half slips and bras, hold them to my face so I can smell her essence. I get so hard, just like when reading this story. Keep doing these it was great.
I still remember when I found my dad's porn magazines, exactly like Dani. Between guilt and excitement. :) I was jealous of these girls, I wanted my dad to want me like he wanted those girls.
Great story and I love the spanking scene!!
Best written story I have read, and nearly the hottest. Don't stop.
I'm sure you've heard it a million times already, but WOW! That was wonderfully written, as are all of your stories I have read. Thank you for sharing, it makes my day just that little more intense ;) 5 from me! xx
WELL THIS IS A GREAT STORY I READ IT TWO TIMES JUST TO MAKE SURE I
DIDN'T MISS ANY THING,GREAT READ WORTH AT LEAST 5 PLUS STARS..
I SURE LIKE THIS KIND OF STORY KEEP IT UP............................."R"
You have a wonderful command of the story teller all writers wish they possesed. Well paced, nice mix of dirty talk as well as being very descriptive. You had me cumming along with daddy. Speaking of which, re read your story and figure out when to drop the 'dad and daddy,' and use he or him.
You are are amazing.
Your story is what I spend hours searching for on this sight.
You definitely have a talent.
Keep it up.
what a story. i wish i had a dad.if i did he would be my mate i,ll just have to settle for my brother
HOT HOT HOT... I've read a few of your stories now and each one is better than the last
O.O Oh my gods master, this has got to be the hottest thing I've ever read. I feel so horny and so filthy just reading it. I need to be fucked real bad
Oh the memories of when Daddy and I first made love almost 30 years ago. Thank you for the wonderful stories you tell and the smooth way you weave reality in with the wonders of good family love
It was the softest and sweetest story of Daddy and his grown-up little girl. Super-hot. A delightful read. Thank you
Sorry, ..... Had to catch my breath !!!! After reading the comments from others,
I am at a loss for words !!! Written with such Flair and Style, is all I can add !!!
That and Thank You for writing it !!!!!!!!
Wow! Amazingly well thought out and put together, very detailed and delicious!!
I was grinning at the toybox, I remember having some of those books that I had pinched from the parents! Brought back old memories from my super horny teenage years. :)
This would be a fun one to have my wife read and see if I could get her interested in finally contributing to some rollplaying.
Very well written super lead up to their inevitable hook up.. 5 stars as well.
5 Stars is no where near enough for such a Great story. This is the best story I have ever read on this site.
for not making her a slut.
for giving the story some class.
for making him a gentleman.
and for letting me know you had stories on this site.
hot doesn't even begin to describe your story.
thank you.
It's obvious even without your consistent high ratings on all your stories and the dozens of comments left by readers that you're probably one of the best writers on this site. I have to echo others and say how much it's appreciated that your stories seem genuine, avoid cookie-cutter scripts and well-worn paths, and don't depend on vulgarity or abuse or anything like that whatsoever.
I have to agree with the previous comment, you're one of the best writers here. I've read several of your stories, and while all dealt with the same thing, there's nothing pattern or repetitive in any of them. your creativity and passion shines thru.
This was one of the best stories I've read on here. Well written, thought out and very hot! Thank you!
Congrats on writing such a wonderful story. The set up was great and you got the daughters feelings perfectly. The transition was a little too quick for me and I would have enjoyed a bit more sexual tension. IMO there would have been more reluctance from the father, then the realisation she had read his magazines and boom.
I write this in hope it will aid your future output. Feel free to comment on my work.
5* from me.
Never having really been a fan of daddy/daughter stories (preferring mom/son) you've made me a convert. I love your writing style and erotic tales. This one is 'spanking.'
Really enjoyed it; it was a slow burn but all of it was so hot and sexy. I kinda wanna know where their sex life evolves - and all the fun things daddy can teach his baby girl how to enjoy together.
The old "only one hotel bed" trope - And then the puerile form of "Daddy" instead of the adult "Dad" or "Father" - The spanking scenario was basically unrealistic - Still, all in all, a really good story . . . .