by scouries
I've never read anything like this! zzzzzz. Oh I'm sorry did I fall asleep?. zzzzzzz. Oh darn there I go again. Now what was I about to say?, Oh yes, the story. It's LONG and failed to hold my intrest. One good thing is zzzzzz. Oh shoot, hey!!!. well anyway if you ever think of doing another story again someone should break your fingers!...
Even though it was long and started slow it was a really good love story. It had just enough sex to keep it going but it isn't a stroke story. I really enjoyed it. With some work this author could really be a writer.
This is perhaps one of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica!
Well Jim, you’ve done it once again.-.one of the best stories on LITEROTICA for some time! You gave us some really hot incestuous coupling and did it a most tasteful way. The picture you painted of the porn film industry was humorous and cleverly done and your characters, while somewhat unreal, were enjoyable in a horny sort of way. Don't let the negative comments distract from the excellence of this tale! I salute you. Pete.
Reads like a campy Harlequinn time period romance, but without the payoff.
This is a truly terrific story of many kinds of sex and relationships. Well done!
Nookiehunter
Simply awesome...I think/hope there will be more to this story....but again, it was just a nice read, easy to follow, not overly descriptive, nor under...MORE...please !!
I really think this is the best of the stories you've ritten. What a great storyline:) I hope you will write some more about them:)
you are still at the great story telling mode i have came to enjoy emissley. homer
I love'd it, it was so great I love'd the way that father and son talked to each other. I love'd the way Binca wiggled herself into their lives. It was just great the whole story!!! You need to write somemore about them, like what happens four or five years later.
I LOVE your perverted mind. Just stumbled upon your name by reading a story in the new listing in Literotica. I'll definitely read more of your stories. You got a TEN on this one. Tex
wow what a story, innocent virgin and her dad and grandad, thanks for a grreat story
This was one of the hottest stories I have every read on this site. Scouries always amazes me with new and interesting plot twists. I don't always know where his tales are going, but it's always a fun ride.
That would be one of the best stories I have read on Literotica - keep up the good work - Thanks again
That would be one of the best stories I have read on Literotica - keep up the good work - Thanks again
Very well done. Almost as if she were telling him what to write for her parts in the story. I don't mean her role in the movie; it is as if she is right beside the writer as he describes her presense there. jim
I thought it was just so perfect. It kept me wantin to keep readin not wantin to stop. The way u start with her then go 2 jim, then back to her and sayin y she was gonna be with him then combining them 2gether. Perfect, perfect. Dani
one of the best stories i have read keep up the good work and will be on the lookout for further stories
I have to congratulate you..this story was simply amazing,well written,and had outstanding sense of life to it.I give it a 20 out of 10 if that's even possible
A terrific story filled with everything a person could want. So much emotion and feeling. It should be a movie, about the only thing it was missing. Should be higher ratings for works of art like this. The absolute best.
Absolutely excellent. The passion was great. I would have liked more too the ending. it seemed the rest of the story took so much out of you that you were just trying to get it done before it killed you. I know that feeling.
nuff said - one of the best writers on here - another thoroughly entertaining read.
Oh my God, I really loved this story. Truly the best!
jumped all over the author, and the remainder praised him and the story. It seems as if some people can't wait to cast a poor vote for poor Jim - wonder why they have to criticize every story he writes. One wonders what they have against this terrific writer. Anyway, I'll add my vote for 5 stars and would give more if I could. I enjoyed the plot, the suspense, the sex, and all about the story. As most of these stories go, you just get a little slice of their life. Too bad, many of us long for more. But we take what you give us, Jim, with gratitude. And we hunger for more.
I seem to recall a statement by Anais Nin that she had been coached about her writing porn....
The story concerned her 'real-life' attempt to provide needed financial support for some of her deadbeat writer friends .
The buyer for her short stories said she needed to concentrate on the dirtiest sex scenerios she was able to think up.
She was one of the world's most celebrated writers of erotica/porn of the early 20th century. (this is true historical data folks)
Jim writes well enough to publish for some of the better erotica Publishers
today...(but they would require a little MORE story matter)
As Ms. Nin said in her autobios....There is a big difference in erotica and porn.
If all this website was just a porn site then you 'yahoos' who bitch should go elsewhere....
As an intelectual reader ( & not JUST a 'wanker') I can truely appreciate Jim's excelent efforts !!!
Very sexy. I liked the slow build up. I loved the characters. Just an all around excellent story. Keep it up!
Really a great story!! Nice job. Hope to read more of your stories!
I wonder if i'm the only one daft enough to try searching for the website?
Can't help but wish this was real life and not just a fantastic story! ;)
NK
I've been reading Erotica for a long while and comparing this story with those of the "professionals" who sell books, I find it completely great. I really think you can go pro any time u like.
The story caught my attention from the beginning and the sex scenes are absolutely hot and uniquely real. They don't sound like some kinky nonsense not really possible and that makes it even sexier.
Keep going, you have my full support!
One of the best stories i've read on here. Well written and very erotic. More please. :-)
i wouldnt have been able to share though,not with anybody. but,it was a nice ending anyway.
a very well written story, loved the twists and turns and the ending was fantastic. thank you for another fantastic story.
Scouries:
Daddy's XXX Casting Call is one of the best stories I've read in years. I certainly hope there is a follow on. Grandpa needs his child, LOL. Maybe a girl on girl with Melissa?
Ron
rcr_98_99@yahoo.com
As always this story by you is outstanding. Your stories are always better than any other author's stories.
A really well written story of love, understanding and sex. Please do another chapter of their love. Maybe a final picture making it the end of the trilogy of porno. Thanks for the story
This is the first time I've actually bothered to read one of your stories, and... you are fucking terrible.
Thanks for the story. Loved the plot and ending.. How do you think up these stories?
Good job.
This one is your best work. The plot is magnificent and the story is equally catchy. It was a painful pleasure to hold the ejaculation till the end, but it was worth it ;-)
Thank you so much for writing. Father/daughter is not my favorite incest but this story was just remarkable.
As a native "Cracker", I'm partial to most things-FLORIDA; music, art, history, TV shows, movies and especially authors. You are in my top tier.
Very well written I was absorbed in the plot and the end brought a moistening of my eyes then ended with a chuckle. Great story 10/10
One of the best, if not the best, incest stories I have ever read. Trick fucking both Daddy and Grandpa without them knowing she was their Daughter/Granddaughter and insisting they both become her lovers was brilliant!!! I have often fantasized about having a sweet young girlfriend and talking her into getting her Daddy to fuck her the first time without him knowing. While having hot steamy mind blowing sex, she does something different that only she and he would know about. Then a day or two later, she reveals to Daddy she had given him the best pussy he has ever had and then continue to enjoy the forbidden fruits, maybe even giving birth to her own sister.
I only wish there was a sequal when Bianca had Grandpa's baby....oh so hot!!!
This is By God better than a Miami Cop show! I say we need to see more (if that is possible) of Bianca. There's still the baby and the baby that Grandpa is supposed to father. But what if Grandpa marries Naomi? Pop buys another Miami office building, letting out office space and warehouse space in the basement. He makes an apartment of the top two floors. The Brother finally reenters the 'family business' when the yoga- wife sees the money flowing like water from old faithful for her in-laws. She does, though, insist on being his 'personal fluffer'. If any of you know what a 'fluffer' is in the porn industry. The Lawyer in him can see himself as the representative for various porn or independant film ventures in the Miami area. More babies. More fucking. More movies. More Chapters.
alli want to say is perfection heres the but tho i hated the supposed rape sceen get rid of that and i sould gladly give it 100 out of five star. with that scene it ruins it.
Yeah, Id lik to c more of Bianca. Wowzer, what'll jimmy do when hiz douther gros up? Or mabe bobby an yogi teach hav a little boy an they gro up and do da nasty Streaming it! Call it "Miami Dade County: Incest IS Best!
This is by far one of your most erotica and moving stories. No matter what I right won't suffice. Thank you.
Real life production and remarkable reading of the class not meant for this site. This could have made a real life novel, More of this story, please
a little hard to follow towards the end, when it was Jimmy/daddy, or grandpa/dad talking.
About a quarter of the way into page two and I knew I was going to click the favorite story button when I got to the end. And I did! I also gave it the well deserved five stars, wishing there were a few more available to give it. This story is one great read!
I liked this sassy, sexy, hot little storie. It wasn't all cutsie, dada booboo like so many of the daddy daughter incest books I have read. Yes she called them daddy and grampa but other than that showed herself as a strong confident woman.Keep writing these stories!
I gave you a 4 because I really did not like the story....it meandered at places and just took to long to really get into the plot. I generally love your wrtting but not this one.
"Daddy's XXX Casting Call:" - This is a fabulous themed story.....but, the plot is tricky--some parts, and dialogue, difficult to comprehend which interferes with the ebb and flow of the story. The title of the story is appropriate in that the plot is akin to an all-out stroke story, which is not a story type that I fully appreciate.
The bottom line, is that the writer/author of 'Daddy's XXX Casting Call' is, all things considered, a 'scouries'-themed story!!