All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 08'

Definitely a great story. Like a previous commenter though, wish the chapters were a bit longer. Still, keep up the great work.

Wow, you are really productiv as writer

Bad or good story, thank

This is a lot of fun! Thank you for writing this power fantasy. It is a great escape from reality.

I wonder a few things though, how long until he takes on the next closest dungeon and wins, and how long until he takes all the will o wisps anal virginity?

A very enjoyable little romp

Thought we were finally going to have 2 chapters of plot progress. I should have known better. It's like this is written by someone who has an attention deficiency disorder. Only it reverts to dick wetting. ::roll eyes::

Why not just use the name Lana? Ya know, like a normal person not talking about someone online or someone in a different area. The character is right effing there.