All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 19'

Good kill him of and end this farce, please do us all a favour !!!

Oof, that cliffhanger...

Finish off battles instead of leaving cliffhangers. Your chapters are so short anyway you can delay getting them out and make them longer. The only positive is that at least you are moving the plot along and not writing pages of repetitive sex.

Can't do this anymore. There doesn't seem to be any real plan for the story other than intending for him to have a harem of monster girls with random fucking. Not to mention reading anal fully mine over and over in these ridiculously short chapters is too much. I hoped it would get better...

Zero growth. And the same mistakes over and over again. Sigh. An MC with the libido of a incubus and a brain of a 5 year old.

And as emotionally deep as a puddle in summer.

kinda rooting for the rogue

All I see is the same people complain, instead do something to better yourselves. I thought I would also give you some advice, its only fair since you all have worked so hard to help the author improve his writing skills. My advice is simple, its something I have practiced myself for many years......... I just find another book to enjoy.

Shapachan