All Comments on 'Ebony and Ivory'

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billc393billc393about 15 years ago
Nicely Done!!

I loved the sexual tension you built into this one! <br><br> I hope you'll write a follow on chapter or two as this is begging to be expanded upon!

MrBill36MrBill36over 3 years ago
ebony and Ivory

What an interesting situation. A dream come true. Paradise in full view. How can he concentrate long enough to complete school. If they were juniors and I a senior- it would take me three more years to complete my degree pgm. Loved your story.

bottovarnisbottovarnisalmost 2 years ago

excellent story! Excellent pacing and tease build, nice job! Thank you.

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