All Comments on 'Educating Mary Ch. 01'

Being repeatedly raped by a lesbian for two weeks will turn her into a submissive for her pussy of a husband who needs assertiveness training way more than she does. If you're not going to have a plot that makes sense, don't bother with millions chapters and stick to vignettes instead. In this case, the guy is such a waste of flash you gotta hope that his wife is converted into a lesbian and divorces him, taking everything he has four her new mistress.

Lets see where you're going to take this.

And your wife sends you to jail and divorces you. Is anyone really THAT stupid, even in fiction? Awful attempt at story telling.

its all about you turning your wife on,or failing miserably at it!! ;)) what will getting a dominatrix to try bdsm on her achieve?!;)) nothing,if Mary,your wife is not wired to pleasure through sadism on herself,and never gets off on it!! ;))...

Looking forward to the next chapter.

erotic fiction. It was a good start and I look forward to reading followup chapters. I do partially agree with one of the other comments. I personally prefer Lesbian d/s stories, so I would like to see the wife fall in love with Erica and ditch her husband. Would serve him right. But that is just me.

I wouldn't ordinarily read this kind of story but it caught my eye and I think it was beautifully written. The casual arrogance by the D is wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Would love to see more.

i found this to be a great beginning and look forward to each new installment. But.I agree with MMT999 below...

There is nothing in this that will benefit the husband or their marriage. The Mistress in this story already laid it out when retelling the events of the last happy couple that tried this. The only winner in this story will be the Mistress - as it should be.

The husband led than both to this destination by following the road paved with what he thought were good intentions. But they weren't good, they were self centered, with no love or respect for his wife, focused only on his needs, with no forethought into where this road would take their relationship. Let's be honest no good Mistress would allow this disrespect to go unpunished. So we all know where this road leads. (will the semen in a jar scene come back to haunt him someday soon - love that foreshadowing - can't wait to hear the explaination for the police)

The wife will be swallowed up into a world of pain and pleasure but there is not enough time in two weeks to build trust or love into the equation. So fear will be the running theme. Fear of pain to start, fear of letting go, fear of losing herself, fear of rejection (which her husband is already doing to her), fear of becoming her new self. The self that Mistress wants to build, not the wife the husbands believes Mistress is building for him. Time and time again the wife will willingly (for fear of pain) yield pieces of herself and receive rewards in the form of physical, mental and chemical pleasure. Treats for Pavlov's dog delivered for each part of herself that she surrenders. But the husband isn't here owning, demanding, controlling these sessions, building trust with his wife, sharing each experience with her, caring for her, loving and learning from each moment they share together - nope he's off on holiday. It's just the wife and Mistress (and Mistress' friends soon). And once the wife finds comfort in these new experiences, possibly even gaining confidence and strength from them (again very very tough in two weeks), why would she ever want to live them with anyone other than Mistress?

Again, like the couple already mentioned in the story, the wife or maybe both of them will find themselves lost without Mistress and while they might leave her house one day, they will never truly get beyond Mistress' presence.

Mary will probably dump her pathetic husband when she realises she would prefer a lesbian relationship.

I loved it! Loved the descriptions and detail. People are funny with their comments, it's your story and I can't wait to read more, I couldn't put it down til I was finished. You truly sucked me into that world.

ayrestom is right, descriptions and details make the story very hot. Well writen. Waiting for more chapters. Anxieus.

This is the hottest story I've ever read in my life. I can't think of a single other thing to say, except please give us more. PLEASE.

This is a great story. You've become a favorite author in 1 story. I'll read the others when I recover. Please write more and please continue this story.

She becomes a lesbian slut, leaves her husband and he goes on with his life like a wimpy cuckold?? Is that your concept! Be aware there a more resources to get deadly revenge!!!