All Comments on 'Emily 2.0 Ch. 05'

The story progression in every chapter has been perfect. Great balance between details, plot moving forward, and explicit content.

Definitely your best work so far and look forward to much more!

Hopefully this is a 20 or even 30+ chapter series! (50 even, lol)

Thanks Carnalval! I've only written 12 chapters but they're all fairly big. There could be scope for a sequel if I can come up with a decent plot though. Suggestions will be welcome when it gets that far. Same with the Casey series. I still haven't decided if the story should go further or if it's better left as it is. I have 4 different plots worked out but I don't really like any of them yet. Another option is I have two really good universes now to create new characters and stories within them. Another option with this one (if Collingwood ever gets that hyperdrive working) there could be all sorts of other worlds waiting out there. Maybe a femdom/Amazon world? But I don't think that goes over well on Lit. :)

"But I don't think that goes over well on Lit. :)"

I'm sorry to say I can attest to that, I am loving this story/world so far and I'd hate for your talent and imagination to be distracted away from my kink! ;o)

Thank you!

I found this story with this chapter. It's reassuring to know that 7GQA9E doesn't like my cum in her hair anymore than my girlfriend.

Such a beautiful paradise.

I'm heading to chapter one (!)

Thanks maddict. Great to see you back!