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CarnalvalCarnalvalover 3 years ago
Another excellent chapter!

My prediction for how it plays out if I may (I'm sure I'm wrong but just for fun, lol)

* The general's misogyny grows, and spreads

* the misogyny isn't directed t all women though, Emily is the epicenter

* even other women there look down on her

* her trysts at bars on pills become a coping mechanism, but she becomes an underground porn star, something no one has ever seen there

* she is lusted after more than other women and in turn is used much more

* this causes problems in the society, it unravels a bit

* they punish her publicly for it, but the punishment turns into a sex show because the general's influence is wide and he enjoys it

* the aftermath is crazy, Collingwood gets their exit prepared among the chaos and Emily's decent into being a fuck toy the likes the plant has never seen, all the while she is reluctant, not lost... but still ravaged almost nonstop

* the general tries to stop their escape, he wants Emily's decent to last forever, he's gone mad (lust pill addiction / black market stuff may be involved), Collingwood is coerced into using Emily in front of him. The general plans to take her

* the general is stopped, they make a frantic escape during all the spreading madness... action chase scene with an athletic naked heroine... but she does get fucked a few more times during the escape by sex crazed loyalists

* they teleport to another world,

* they end up in another fucked up alternate world, Emily's adventures continue... She still wants to get home, but during her punishments she was changed into a nymphomaniac, and that goal is muddled in her sexual haze. Collingwood plays the hero, figuring out another escape, while also trying to change her permanent alteration

(maybe she ends up in Casey's world, and gets registered there... but her actions drive a more extreme development in that society, and sexual slavery becomes a thing... ) another escape plays out, this time on the ship she has a leash and a collar, Collingwood shakes his head at her and laughs as they teleport away.

* in future teleports, she regains her sanity (somewhat lol... still a lustful one) and is more of a nsfw hero herself... give her the Samus Aran treatment (lol... genetic manipulation to increase breeding potential - down feather pubes! A very nsfw exhibitionist scifi outfit), or any number of crazy sci fi scenarios like you mentioned lol

* we don't know the fate of the general's world (for now... maybe another heroine ends up there, or Emily gets trapped there again... years later, the world is much darker, and her stay is much shorter as she is passing through)

lol sorry just had to share

velcrofistvelcrofistover 3 years agoAuthor

Dammit Carnalval! That's really good. I did something else with it but nothing that would rule out a sequel with a few of those ideas...

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe202911 months ago

Welcome to my sh!t list General (yes, you will die, one way or another. Next question).

That new office girlfriend could be an ally or a spy/traitor so I'm going to monitor her carefully. This new job is waaay too convenient to be honest therefore it's a trap. Poor Collingwood is obviously lost and confused, conflict of interest on his brain(s) and maybe heart. I'm hooked on this saga because it makes you think and makes you feel. Good job, writer.

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I generally write stories with a reluctant ENF (embarrassed nude female) with public nudity & sex theme, but other things will creep in there from time to time, even a little femdom. One of the key elements of my plots is to imagine what a world would be like if certain bizarr...

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