All Comments on 'Erotic Endings'

Great story. It was only one thing that bugged me: Why does the writer use the expression "shit-eating smile"? What does the writer mean with that word? Do you smile when you eat poop? That made me go limp:)

I found it quite arousing.

One section stopped me briefly:

We could really have a nice time together while your there.

should be

We could really have a nice time together while you're there.

Thanks for your fine story!

Thank you for this story. It reminded me of the times my boyfriend and I have played with other people. It got me hot enough to begin touching myself. I've already put in the phone call for him to come over and play.

are just plain nasty bitches...never content with one man but have to other cocks...hope they get AID's or STI's and infect every other man they fuck with...it is what they deserves...throw the scum bitches in the gutter where they belong.....