All Comments on 'Family Paradise Ch. 01'

So much love, fun, warmth and sexiness comes through in your work. This is shaping up to be an incredible story.

HURRY WITH MORE!!!!

...and has me wanting and waiting for more.

As usual an excellent beginning to a story! I am looking forward to the future chapters with great anticipation!! Please don't make your loyal readers wait too long!!!

And I can't wait to read more

I agree with hulvamulva about the warmth, fun, and sexiness that comes through.

On a side note, sometimes typos are just too funny. This one had me roflmao: "waiting for the lunch to be made ready to bring us back". Even better, it went well with the fun tone of the story.

Looking forward to reading more!

Quite the imaginative island and the picture in my mind is very peaceful place to be.

Being so secluded and with 7 horny people to have the privacy to do what they want, I'm sure there is going to be a lot of fucking going on.

I'll be watching for the next erotic chapter, thanks

I have read many of Many Feathers stories. Each one gets better and better. He needs to be awarded for his efforts. Many Feathers writings are so vivid and the characters are extremely deep. His stories always move so seamlessly from one scene to another. Every time I finish a chapter I only want more. Keep writing Many Feathers and don’t ever stop. You inspire me in my own writings. Thank you.

and getting better all the time,,,well written and erotic,,good tension!!

vice is nice but incest is best....

wow - tease was great, sex was great - 5 great stars. you have a great way with words!!!