All Comments on 'Family Therapy 01'

What was that? Eric told him that their sex life is dull because his doesnt like to try anything because of her religious upbringing. Hanna pretty much tells him that she is sad about not being able to be open for something new because of her upringing. And what does David? He hints that he would like to cuck Eric and fuck Hanna. As therapy of course. If he didnt mean that then I dont know why he only talked about cucking as a form of therapy. I just dont get how they got to the point. To get Hanna over her recuctance and shame she needs to fuck David while Eric watches? Seriously, I think they should go to an actual professional and not to a supposed friend who just wants in the pants of the wife.

given there is no sex why isnt this in non erotic?

Really good opening. You write well and your characters are solid.

I like this

Yep. Sounds like a predator and his prey.

Please continue.

Keep it going, very hot and some great possibilities!!

What a great setup for a story of families finding their way. Looking forward to the next installment.

Great buildup and character intro.

Interesting start to a story of therapy.

another cuck/wimp story in the making.

Tags please... don't want to waste time reading sissy wimp cuck garbage.

"She was so happy to see you, David." - She WILL BE... She hasn't seen him yet.

This mess makes no sense.

A meh story that seems to be going the incest route with nothing to justify dumping it in Loving Wives. I mean, it's better than the normal troll trash posted here but that's really not saying much.

Poorly written LW story. Stick to your other categories.

Good beginning!

4

Excellent storey, and very clever writing, I’m really looking forward to the next chapter/s, do ignore the naysayers below. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Interesting story. I gave it a 5. I’d love to read about anything sexual that might happen.

Really love this story and where it is going. Keep it going.

Just another cucking-lifestyle promotion tale: it's so modern, it's so good, to be faithful in a marriage is for dinosaurs, and so on. A slow circling around the same old cucking plot with an unbelievable ridiculous idiot husband and the regular whore wife.

Cuck fantasy in progress without the correct tags.

forlujon2019

given there is no sex why isnt this in non erotic?

Just to hear you whine

Looking forward to more

good start

As below mentioned..predator and prey. Grooming them slowly. Loving wives?

TC Ireland

Good story, there are sex therapy people out there and they do guide and sometimes fuck their clients. A friend of a buddy’s girlfriend was having trouble down there and took it upon himself to go to one . The woman treated him and it included sex . After six months he was back to normal and revealed it to his wife. He started taking her to the session and the three were having sex in a much open and adventurous way. Apparently the therapist showed how once in a blue she should use a strap on and gently take her hubby’s ass. He wants yours so he’ll give you his in a loving way of course. They double teamed the wife and did all the wildest sex you’d see in porn. It worked for them but I’d never be that guy but to each his own . Their friend moving forward will be fucking his wife and daughter it seems.

Interesting storyline and seemingly a fresh angle on the concept. I’m awarding it four stars and hope to see the next chapter soon. Good job!

This morons only agenda is to get into both Hanna and Julia's pants and pass it off as therapy I don't know what state you are in but you just can't see people as a therapist without a license.

Like watching grey paint dry.

At least it’s not 75 pages!

Nice setup with ch. 1. This can now go in so many directions, though a bit of backstory on David’s wife would give insights, perhaps, into why David has become the person he now is.

Where are you going with this? I think i know but it is uncertain. That was a long demographic type exposition and beginning, but not much of a hook to entice the readership. I guess a slow burn can be good but not what my social media trained mind wants

He comes across as a con-man hypnotist or something like it. I got the heebee-jeebees. Creepy AF.