All Comments on 'First Date'

by slavegirl1992

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 8 years ago
Nice...

What a good first story! Thank you. Short, realistic, erotic and stimulating. Enjoyed it. Is there more to come? Hope so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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Just what was he having the blogger do to her inner thighs?

;D

I would have like a wee bit more about how they came to their 'first date' being so..active. Just a sentence or two even.

tyedwards35tyedwards35over 8 years ago
Wonderful fantasy

I enjoyed the story a lot. It reminds me of similar fantasies that have come true in my past. Keep writing and sharing your fantasies!

PirettePiretteover 8 years ago
Good Start

I was just getting into the flow, when you ended the story.

Would you consider making future stories longer?

What you did write was quite good!

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999almost 6 years ago
Women, as they once were, might be, and ought to be...!

Isn't it NICE to see girls and women welcoming and conforming to the natural sweetness, submission, and eagerness-to-please that defines traditional femininity so well? Modern women and feminists have made their case, have had their "15 minutes of fame" and can exit the stage anytime-and be replaced by better women!

Good Riddance to 'em! Give me a compliant "Little Lady Lovely" any day of the week!

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