All Comments on 'Flowers in the Park Ch. 09'

A wonderful couple!

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Thanks Boyd! I really appreciate your comments!

This is a lovely sweet love story, very nicely presented. If it lacks anything, it has little drama. We have known from the beginning that all would run smoothly; and it has.

Great story. Thank you

Thanks des911. You might still get some drama before too long, so hold on!

Great series so far with solid character development and plot progression. Have to disagree with the complaint about drama. The start of the story was embroiled in the drama that spilled over from their previous relationships. Depending on how many chapters are coming, there maybe some space to have his ex have some remorse, but I wouldn’t write it in just for the sake of doing it. 5*

He hasn’t even been to lady town plus why is she so hung up on going into his room when he was only getting changed she’d already spent hours naked