by cricketmuse
Thank you so much for coming back to this story. I know writers block is a pain but I'm glad you had a break through. I have been checking back weekly hoping this would update! Thanks for not giving up!
I'm so happy you continued this story. I really enjoyed this chapter and hope you will continue to update a bit more often. It's a good story and we really want to see where it leads.
I had to go back and reread the last two chapters because I couldn't remember all the details. It reminded me why I love this story. Great job and keep the updates coming!
Thank you so much for posting another chapter!! This is one of my 3 favorite stories here ever! This chapter was very well written and the interaction between Gray and Kiera during the sex scene was very natural; well done!! Plus, it was HOT! Please don't take too long for the next installment.
thank you a story that involves everything especially humour but where is the next chapter coming? I want more
Very good story so far! How long will I have to wait for more? More PLEASE!
I love your story have sat and read it all in one go added you to my favs, keep writing!!
Awesome! keep writing!!! i cant wait for the next one or how the whole thing is gonna turn out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
as a link from one of the other stories I was reading....wonderful stuff! I hope you continue writing, I'd love to keep reading!
this series was a great read. Am looking forward to the next chapter.
im def looking forward to the next chapter hope it is soon. i love the story.
It has been many months since you updated. Can you at least add an update to your BIO so I know if I should stop looking for a new chapter or expect a new one soon? This is such a good story and has so many possibilities. I hate to waste my time waiting for an update though.
i'm liking this very much, hope you find the time to release another chapter in the near future.
M
I and others are hoping to soon have you continue with this story as we've all enjoyed and want more!!
Wow that was like wow. Please continue this wonderful story. I mean like wow. Its great I love this story.
Love this tale, am hoping that you do continue. Been too long, post soon!
I think if he says the three little word "I love you" she will cave into him completely as I think she already loves him. So come on please post soon we have been waiting to long!
I'm enjoying ur characters - they seem true to how people woud react and how a werewolf would be imagined. I also really appreciate that you don't write Kiera as a pushover. I like their compromising - seems like a better basis them him trying to crush her spirit. I do think Kiera would have a bigger problem w. mating then has been shown so far - but thats just my opinion. Can't wait for more!!
If she is an empath, can't she feel the love he feels for her? I just read all 8 chapters at once. Talk about really loving this series.
This is a great story but I have to wonder if this is how you intended it to end. I see you are trying to get chapter eight finished, I hope its soon, I'll be looking forward to it. Besides a few typos this was on over all good story and I really enjoyed it. Also to anonymous who wrote about her feeling his love for her, if you've ever been in love its a complex emotion. And lots of people rationalize something rather than make mistakes or to look like a fool. That may be what Kierea has done rather than jump into something when they've only known each other for a few days.
the story is really good but you left unanswered questions... who tried to kill kiera? will gray and kiera ever be mated? just to name a few. i enjoyed the story so please continue on or at least write a epilogue
I'm loving your story & your character!! Interesting combination of the paranormal and werewolves; I can't wait to see what happens next! Please hurry and finish the next chapter ASAP; I want to know what happens.
From 08/03/09 to 10/14/10 there have been 34 comments counting this one and all are asking the same thing "more please" so don't you think we have waited long enough for the rest of this wonderful story? You said you had the next chapter written what seems like years ago and yet we don't see it! If you don't intend to finish it please let us know so we can stop checking with the hope of seeing more chapters posted only to leave disappointed.
Please finish this story it is so good and has me hooked and wanting more.
I have to say this is one of the best stories that I have found to date. Please continue to wright more to this story
ASAP.
When you called this chapter The sleepover continues I didn't expect it to last over a year. I think it is time to finish the sleepover and get back to Grey finding out who is attacking them, maybe Kiera and her friends could help him! So post soon please. If you have decided not to continue this story please tell us.
I adore your story and will admit to obsessively checking to see if you've posted more for a year now! Please continue your story! You've brought your story too far to not finish now!
Are you ever going to finish this amazing story?! I agree with willieone 100%, if you're not (and I really wish you would!!) then at least be courteous and tell your fans so we can stop checking!! (But for real, please, please,please finish!!)
I just came across your story and instanly enjoyed it very much! I hope that there will be more soon :)!
So digging each and every chapter...every one and this is a first. The chick is bright and on point in her exchanges with the Alpha. He is appreciative of her sassy wit and sharp retorts. He is the man and a hottie to boot. This tale along with some great wine is a wonderful way to kill an evening.
I am completely and utterly obessed with Gray and Kiera. They are awesome and like I said in the comment in the previous chapter, you are very talented.
Love,
Your Number 1 Fan
This is the first werewolf story that I've come across that practices / preaches safe sex. You, ma'am, are to be congratulated :)
Definitely like the idea of someone not cumming 4-5 times in a rowl, caring not to get her pregnant on the 1st? wow this wolf is so HUMAN!! loved it!
but....could you tell me where he got a condom that increases the size to a knot??? LOL ok, it's your story and I LOVE ALL OF IT
@posionlove, I couldn't agree with your comment any more than I already do.
As far as the question about the condom, as long as the knot didn't push the condom off, it can stretch even if the girth or circumference of the knot was over 10 inches (baby heads are bigger). We have put condoms over medium sized watermelons to show girls that no man is too big to wear a condom. (But that is a good question.)
are there any good finished stories on this site? Read 6 in a row that are unfinished, sitting dormant for 5 years or more.