by LL_Timber
You pulled me into the story immediately with a sense of drama and well hewn, believable characters. Couple of spellings need tightening but no major editing problems. I look forward to reading more of your work.
This looks very promising, I can't wait for more, as they say "fire when ready"
Thanks for the comment, power_skull1. Chapter 2 is on it's way...should be approved here in the next couple of days. :)
Mate, crack on with this one. Nicely set up. Spare prose. Very Cormac McCarthy.
Thanks so much for the author comparison! :) Cheers!
Great start to what seems to be a promising story! I hope you go far with this story!
I really want to know what happens next...keep them coming please! Thank you DW
I just hope after your dream inspires a story that you can continue it if you don't happen to dream about it again:) Very good start!
on your first story. You have already peaked my interest and I'm glad to hear chapter 2 is on the way. This is my first story involving "Zombies" and that you are pairing it w/Wolves, I can't wait to read more. So again congrats on being a published author and good luck w/not just this story but everything you write.
I am loving this story. Always thrilled to find a new author to appreciate. Looking forward to chapter 2.