All Comments on 'Fuckaphile Ch. 03'

by mitchawa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Either...

Literotica is broken, or, more likely, your formatting is. Either way, it is making this unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I think your spell checker works, but spelling was not the trouble. Words like cheery and cherry will be skipped by a spell check. Also depts passed when you meant depths. It is better to read (outloud if necessary) to find these errors.

Aside from that, some may not appreciate the rapist/sexual peddler character. I think he could be caught because he will meet up with or say a phrase recognizable and the rest will be discovered. If you wish to continue change his locale or end with him marrying a MILF he takes.

Bruce

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

All these times you had women completely helpless and you didn't fuck ANY of them in the ass?!!!!!

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