by masterandmargarita
You really must bring us more of these amazing characters! Thank you -- five stars.
Loved the sex. Wish it had been me! But here we have what I guess was a virgin who had cum in his pants with no manual stimulation, and we are to assume he was sucked and fucked and never came until they gave him the O.K.! He would have cum when they bared their tits. And, if by some miracle, he had not cum before he was tied to the chair, the first suck of his cock and touch on his balls would have set him off. It would have been more realistic to have him blow a quick load and recover quickly for more sucking and the fucking. Just not realistic at all. Only 3 stars.
You nailed the dialogue--it makes the story. Fantastic descriptions, too. This one gave me some laughs. Well done!
first time reading of @masterandmargarita , The story is great in so many level the buildup, the teasing, and the characters, the dialogues. it is well written story , though I think after all that buildup & teasing it deserve a longer detailed solid sex scene, I mean each girl came once she penetrant , one or two sentence for each one.
I don't know if that is the author's writing style in general, however it makes me wonder what not most of author combine between the plot and sex, why I found only one of the element. anyway It's 5 stars story.
This was great! It had so many interwoven story lines branching off, it feels like it could make a series. On the other hand so many scenarios were explored admirably already!