by Lost Boy
Like the way you ended it with Mom...any more chapters out there?
i have a few pieces ahead of this one but if it does well, yeah i will write more.
With the 'man' of the house fucking all the women....at least one or more of them will want to or will accidentally end up pregnant...continue this tale please!
if you failed to give them another chapter - or two - after reading this. you have a real talent. Please don't disappoint us!
Amazing. I loved this story. While the derelict in me says each encounter could be a chapter alone, it was still a truly amazing story.
All I have to say is awesome smoking hot story and I have alot of respect for you but I will loose all respect if you don't pop out another chapter
This story is very well written and quite entertaining, not to mention, very erotic. I hope you continue it.
please continue with the story if you can continue with the same grace and style as this was.
Truly delicious;). I laughed out loud with the first 'Don't tell mom.", hehehe!
The only soft request I could make would be to leave out the God and Jesus cussing.... Yes, I know, rather hypocritical of someone reading incest erotica, hehe, but it just makes me cringe and drops my comfort level till I get back into the good story. Whew! My one serious request would be to use contractions more frequently when characters are talking, unless it's needed specifically, otherwise it makes them sound like robots.
Hats off for the really fun story!! Thank you!! :^}
Great story, what a shame you ended the story where you did. You’ve already done the hard work by creating the characters and storyline. He’s the master of one why not all of the. There’s so much more you can add to this story. Still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️