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pooky12349pooky12349about 7 years ago
Got any batteries

It didn't take long to figure out that from somewhere she got a viberator, however, there was no indication what or why she was going door-to-door. I guess I don't like stories that are trying to be coy. You are a good writer, I simply wasn't that interested in reading the whole story to find out what she was doing and why.

However, don't let me stop you, you have a talent for story writing.

Ted

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