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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please continue this series

FormerReaderFormerReaderover 7 years ago
Just like I would have wrote it...

As a long time Star Wars fan and SWTOR player, I like where you are going with this new series. Personally I always kept to the spirit of the jedi code but not the letter, it's just too restrictive to be practical. If a Jedi has no emotion, they would never stand up to the Dark side, because they would not care. Props for adding in the Defender class ship from SWTOR, and it would truly be a relic by the time of the story LOL.

Keep going! Cant wait!

OldManSOldManSover 3 years ago
There is no ending to this story....!

AUTHOU QUIT BEFORE FINISHING IT. IT LIKE SOME ONE TORE THE BACK PAGES OUT BEFOR GIVING YOU THE BOOK TO READ.

BEWARE

I WONDER IF AUGUY THINKS ITS FUNNY AS HE DID THE SAME WITH WIZARD IN ATLANTA.

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Welcome, readers! My name is M.H. Barton, also known as auguy86. I am an author of erotic literature, dabbling mostly in romance and sci-fi/fantasy. I have lived for my entire life in the southern United States, aka "The South." I live here with my fantastic and loving wife, ...

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