All Comments on 'Greengages Ch. 01'

I like the openness and affection of your characters. Looking forward to the continuation...

Thanks, ohio

Good theme but to fast in developing. Get an editor dn keep writing

It developed a little too fast to be realistic and I agree this would be more suited to the incest category. The story is pretty interesting though.

WTF did I just read? This may be the worst that I have ever read. That's high praise.