All Comments on 'Halloween Party'

You could really use an editor before you post another one...

NOT trying to discourage you from continuing to write, just let someone who knows how to use spell-checker read it before you publish.

Would love to read a follow on story where he confront his step-mom.

I agree with both comments and am here if you want the help. It was a good story and can go in several directions.

But a month late -- or eleven months too early. Nicely done, nonetheless -- a second chapter would be welcome, especially if you take up the offer of help. Four stars and 'Thank you'.

This was just a series of «porn» scenes with not very much of emotions involved that could create any excitement.

Guys making thumbs-up to the camera after love making is a sure way of ruining any erotic movie - creating the feeling you're rather watching a sports tournament - and in this story we regrettably got many such thumbs.

Sorry, but this means that from me you get thumbs down.

I would love to read more where Daniel confronts Stacy, with the undoubtable blackmail sex that would follow.

The sex scenes in part one are a very good way to set-up the action for future sexcapades.

Please do not disappoint.

No way he could have missed her appearance comparison film and way she came home