All Comments on 'Heather'

by dayandnight1

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asiaprofasiaprofover 16 years ago
Well-written, especially for a 1st submission.

However, is this really NCR?

Sounds more like BDSM...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More please

Good story setup - waiting for next episode

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yes..

This genre isn't just non-consent.. it's also 'Reluctance' and she's quite reluctant to do anything with this man. I'd say it fits the category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What about...

Two items:

1) In reality the interns would probably have to have at least a Master's degree and published thesis to be recruited by a research organization.

2) I'm curious about the indoctrination for the males. What do they get that's analogous to a hymen restoration?

Beyond that I enjoyed the story and look forward to part 2.

Diddle_TimeDiddle_Timeover 12 years ago
Very Good.

Slow start.. lovely to read.

Heading to Chapter 2.

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