by watchdwag
just brilliant keep up the good work hope to see more soon as this is getting hotter and hotter
And we now know how Neecey will be introduced into the story.
It will be interesting to see what Michelle will take the news that it was her friend that set her up.
This is great !
Can we hope to hear about Kat and Taylor, as well ?
Some BDSM and more behavioral conditioning moves a great story a long quite nicely. It is now obvious that Michelle is being converted or inducted into a lesbian lifestyle for Denise. Keep the great chapters coming.
So disappointed as I started to read page one, I realised the storyline of Kim's seduction, was a carbon copy of a character in the 'Seduction Of A Babysitter' series, not only that, but it was practically word for word, which spoiled this storyline for me, when I thoroughly enjoyed the build up in 01-03. So after only getting part way down page one, I gave up reading any further. Which is a pity as I consider you a really good writer, in the main. But rehashing your previous work, but giving it a new name, seems like cheating your readers. Shame.
How can anyone love someone truly if they are coerced into it. For a fantasy sex story, its quite baseless and seems to think that reader is a fool.
Playroom scene felt a bit rushed, almost unnecessary given the build up. The flip from straight to a week of fun to lesbian slut was a bit too fast given the drugs from part 1 would have been out of the system. Solid 3 stars but a bit short of the 1st part. Looking forward to the next part.