All Comments on 'I Didn’t Even Know His Name'

by LynnGKS

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Interesting story.

I liked her referring to her cunt as she or her, a different POV. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hotter than the noon-day sun in Miami!

Lynn,

This story was extremely well-composed. The brief background and suspenseful theater intro's crescendo led to the main focus: FUCKING! Also, just to get the proverbial "house-keeping" done--your writing structure, word choice,grammar and sp. were superb. Those latter traits aid any story's read well, which is often not the case at this site,

I drive a Toyota Camry and know exactly what you wrote about space is so true. The cunt needs openness and no fucking 4-on-the-floor. Good for BJ's tho'. Fortunately, your heroine stepped into an SUV and had the leg room her cunt demanded. Again the sex was paced as well as the clit-massaging movie fingers. She was tight (from Kegels) and, her owner proved to be masterful.

A woman readding your story would be as wet as she (?cunt or heroine--you decide). As for me, a somewhat more matured male ... (you decide). Now I'm off to read the sequel (what's the name of the story!).

You are One of the top-5 writers at this site, Lynn. professorwheeze@excite.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good, hot writing!

You're very skillful and versatile. No dialogue at all this time, and it's still effective. Thanks.

Will6969doWill6969doover 9 years ago
Great story!

I had a similar night that started at a skating rink

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Where the hell is everyone? Nine and twelve years since

a comment? This is a damn sexy story, well written and

true to life. A girl wants what she wants, what she needs.

Perhaps she’s too blunt for most men to handle?

Anyway, well done. Thanks,

shr

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