All Comments on 'In the Bays of Sardinia 05 +PICS'

As always, 5*. The art is beautiful and erotic. Love the story line so please keep it going. You have a way with the pen and brush.

Very nice job with the illustrations - best I have seen.

Please continue! This series is so hot.

Excellent!

Solid erotica and illustrations!

And brought back vivid memories of spying on my parents when I came home for college breaks, after they had gotten used to having the house for themselves.

5 stars!!! Love the incest that’s going on.

This is A+. Please publish the next 06 soon..cant wait..

I anxiously awaited this chapter, and it doesn't disappoint. Very erotic! And ended too soon.

it's about time they each went all the way, we know they want to. Also it would be nice if mom had an interlude with Lissy'

Yes !

The next installment !

THANKS !

And at least one more to come ... Hope.

Bravo!

No doubt one of the best authors around.

It is a pity that we have to wait so long between chapters of the different stories.

Anyway, congrats

Terrific illustrations. Incest isn't my thing, but the artwork drew and kept me!

Excellent as always. I too am hoping that Terry & Mary and Paul & Lissy go all the way before this series ends.

Magnificent writing, with illustrations that are exemplary.

Thank you for sharing your gift(s)

Fantabulous

I couldn't agree more with the prior posts about the high quality of these illustrations. Absolutely the best illustrative efforts that I have seen in years of finding pleasure on Literotica. The narrative is strong too. Not to minimize the narrative but the illustrations brought it all together so beautifully and erotically.

Well worth waiting for…

A beautiful and sensually loving story. It does leave the door open for further family adventures moving forward. The illustrations were perfect for this story.

Great story line and graphics. I love the great looking people and not over sized parts. Because I love to see women in bikini panties please include more in future stories. I look forward to anything you write.

This story bagan as an easily 5 rating that rapidly went to a 4 and quickly. This was a good story line, it was pretty well edited, and it began with very excellent illustrations of a "DARK and HAIRY, BUT NEATLY TRIMMED SEXY pussy and tasty looking lick-able, gentle finger-able, and very deep tongue-able slow insertion anus!" Too bad the next images quickly went to shaved with stubble pending images. I am just not ever going to be into stubble when it comes to oral on a female. I seriously don't know anyone who is into those "silly brier-patch splintered-up non-oral possible tongue gouging messes of a mound ladies and I do not ever expect to meet anyone who is, male or female. Better luck next time or continue to expect 2 and 3 ratings.

Great story & images! You encouraged us to post our own pics. Check them out - M & N

Great story. I hope it doesn't take as long to get the next chapter. This story is wide open for all kinds of options. So much left for this foursome to explore and then maybe a visit by the grandparents.

Excellent work. Please give us the next chapter. It's frustrating to wait so long. No other stories can match your art work and narrative build. It's driving us crazy. Hope we will get next chapter soon

Fantastic work. Please give us the next chapter. It's frustrating to wait so long. Its really captivating, No other stories can match your art work and narrative build. It's driving us crazy. Hope we will get next chapter soon