All Comments on 'Innocent Nicole Becomes a Porn Girl'

Can't see any connection between the story and the title.

Nice story, though!

Seems a reasonable heading. Assuming it's going to be a multi part story, then we've just seen the 'Innocent' part. Perhaps 'Naive' would have been a better description, as I find it hard to believe that such people actually exist. Interesting story nevertheless.

First, I think this should be in the Humor and Satire category. Pretty over the top description of the Women's program at Whatever U. However, I do agree with one of the other comments that the story does not seem to have anything to do with the title. It does look like the NEXT installment will perhaps get us there; it had better. And somebody needs to help Tym get to that sexless ideal he's looking for. Perhaps they can take a butcher's knife and remove his genitals.

This is over the top to the point that it reads like a passive-aggressive dig at social justice and feminism rather than anything erotic.

While there's a scene with someone watching some completely unerotic sex, this is mainly satire. That's how you destroy your rating potential from the get go.