All Comments on 'It All Goes Wrong, Pt. 01'

That's a neatly planned, very believable plot so far. I like it quite a lot! Coming from your Paradise Isle stories it's quite a different topic so far, but very fun nevertheless. I'm looking forward to the next chapters to see what you make of that beginning!

Good story with totally unexpected twist.

Really shocked me.

I hope you have the "Rest Of The Story" coming along soon, There are so many ways it can go.

I like your story. You definitely need to continue it. I want to see where it is going.

Excellent start!

Love your story! Can’t wait for the rest of it 🥰

Another totally different and well written story line thank you. Look very much forward to the next chapter. Many thanks.

More please!

A great start. I hope this is leading to a long series

Well written and nicely paced. Looking forward to what’s next!

I like the story - it's totally believable and I can sympathise for poor Andie - a girl being being all alone in a strange town.

I identified with the problems of trying to bend over when wearing constricting shapewear also. I was fully expecting Andie to try to attach her stockings to her garter belt belt clips, this being almost impossible when wearing nail extensions but you contemplated that nicely by having her stick on her extentions when she was already dressed.

I also appreciate the time and trouble that you have taken to avoid grammar and spelling mistakes - something that ruins so many stories by other authors.

Can't wait to read more!

The flow of emotions in the changing situations and the rollercoaster ride they take make this such a wonderful and believable journey. Knowing how I would feel if that happened to me makes me wonder how Andie has managed to not totally lose it and just have a breakdown right in the parking garage. I cannot wait to continue this adventure that Andie finds herself on.

Lexx xoxo

I have enjoyed this and wondered if any of it was autobiographical. Thank you for a story that mentions all the fears and nervousness of being transgendered. I know it is difficult to portray the intensity of that without spending pages that would force some readers to lose interest.

It is not autobiographical. It is based only on my own broad and varied fantasies and healthy imagination, as are all my writings.