All Comments on 'Jaci Stone'

I like your stories, but they all seem to jump details. I only mentioned because you seem to have worked hard, and it's almost as if parts are left in your imagination. Also, even when I started reading I knew it would end in some form of tragedy. That almost made me skip it, but how could I? Your MCs are always likeable, but seem prone to misfortune. Everytime one thinks they are going to be better off they get piled on. It's fascinating to imagine how I would deal with this kind of pressure, and I often think I would break like a kit kat bar.

needs another chapter to where they land safely with no damages and no injuries

I hope there will be another chapter.

Maybe there was a protection spell on Jaci and Pete.

Jaci had to make it who is telling the story.

Tim

You had my full attention throughout the entire story.. I loved the characters Jaci especially except when she hurt them back emotionally, I understand it but it makes me uneasy .. I was concerned when they turned their back on each other and at Samantha's loss .. I am worried that Jaci and Pete were really killed, that would be too much for Gaia to do considering her view of all of them .. please write more chapters to continue their lives .. if I was Jaci I would have gone all female and made up a temporary magical penis for extra fun real only when and if she wants it .. thank you for your writing and consideration, Tiffany MtF TG girl xoxo

i will say this is one of my favorite stories on this site thank you

Wtf?! NOOOOOO!!!!!!! I'll be heading immediately to the next part! I am loving this story. Is it available in paperback? 😍