All Comments on 'Jane & Julie Go Home for Christmas'

Great very erotic story that really could of used a few more chapters the ending was very rushed and took away from the story

The whole thing at the club was ruined by reality that kept invading my thoughts. I ended up skipping through some to find more interesting details. A story needs background, so I will call it my problem there. The second night should not have been much of a big deal since both sets of twins fucked the night before. The brother/sister sex drew my attention, but the brother was discarded by the sisters quickly. Not much of what I wanted out of the content except a bit of incest.

RS

Every guy dreams about great slut.cant beat these two. Really good story and look forward to more about all of them. Good luck on contest.

Way too much time spent on the main characters feeling guilty and sinful. Christian moral conundrums mixed with partner swapping and repetitive incest made for a boring, and honestly rather moronic narrative. Lose the apologetic guilt next time and you'd maybe have a decent story. All the moralizing just annoyed the hell out of me and really messed up the story.

It sure isn't a winning story. I agree with CliterateDyke.

Ya lost me with someone named Sam. I stopped after 2-3 time of this name.

TBC

Nevermind how cheesy and annoying it was to picture them singing literally--LITERALLY--everything, all the references to music theory and songs and whatever the fuck, it was just so... douchey.