All Comments on 'Jane's beach Lesson'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Incredibly erotic

A highly charged erotic adventure. To brutally honest it sounded absolutely magical just being able to wander around naked and do what comes naturally. Fingers crossed that he’s a decent guy, I’m sure that she wouldn’t be offended if he talked about it in vague terms (re location) even online because it’s very sexy. Posting the video online would be a huge breach of trust/ etiquette though.

Tess (UK)

GoofyRobGoofyRobalmost 4 years ago

Too mechanical. It has the makings of a good story but just fell short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Unlikely

I have trouble believing this story, not sure why... good premise, fairly well written, but it just never “pulled me in”.

Keep trying, I believe you have a good potential!

maddictmaddictalmost 4 years ago

I liked it, Jane you should have owned the moment. Wave back, find out who he is, then just see what he's about.

Yes you needed to be spanked

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