by Jay321
An absolutely excellent storyline and l think there should be more, but if you decide to stop now that is okay to. Definitely 5 🌟 's
This was wonderful! Thank you for showing realistic scenes, and subspace, and and and! One of my favorites!
its a great read man you doing a really great job keep it up.
This BEGS a part 2...the aftermath and more involvement in the lifestyle.
What an awesome story, That It draws you right in and leaves us all wanting more.
Please continue this was very well written and a pleasure to read.
I never leave comments but I had too. Damn I wish I could find a man to do that to me. Very well written, kept me engaged the entire length!
reminds a lot about the journey i took with my husband as he got me involved in the lifestyle. would love to read more about Jase and Cat.
It needs some spellchecking and proof reading but is really pretty good. I was surprised that at the end I was curious about where the story might go if it continued. This held my interest even through the lesbian encounters that usually bore me. A good read. Thanks.
I am not one to leave comments often but this story deserved one. It was well written and almost true to life. I loved the way you worked the floggers and other things over them. Being one that loves using a blade in real life it surprised me to see it in your story.
Well done wish there were more parts to read.